DH Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 just something i wrote in 5 min when i was trying to get my thoughts sorted so like my previous posted work its not refined. But thought i'd share it anyway. Do my dreams speak true? Is what I seek you? Do these worlds show what can be Or am i but sleeping awake desiring you For you are all I can see Nought a dawn did I behold till I felt this love Your eyes paling the stars My body left empty and my soul to stare As those stars shine on another Your light crosses the land All living things feel your warmth I sit in the overhang awed at your beauty fearful yet longing for your touch And but the light takes its form of your body will my heart feel yours and your touch claim me for paradise Will this new day have a night will you see my love? if you could only see it maybe you'd understand why I stand here with a knife but your back turned, my heart stopped the knife slipped, the light has vanished the heavens opened its floodgates i ran into the downpour howling grief and now i find myself at your door my eyes stare at the dark window here i shall stay Where you fall i'll be waiting When you cry i'll be listening When your heart breaks I will share it When you smile the light will shine through And when you hold him I'll be holding the knife For my own actions i never felt the sun, can see nothing but Darkness and am destined to this living death. Let the 3 daggers of time embrace me as friend Darkness recede and let me relive the sight of your light Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meow18 Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 I liked this poem. I think my favorite part was: Where you fall i'll be waiting When you cry i'll be listening When your heart breaks I will share it When you smile the light will shine through And when you hold him I'll be holding the knife Its something everyone can relate to, so I think many people would like this poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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