ang3l2004 Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 I sit here as day becomes night then night becomes day, I want to feel your soft skin brush accross mine. When you are not around and I call with nothing to say, It is because I miss you it's not just me passing time. When I still tell you that you are everything you are my heart, When I see your brown eyes looking deep into mine. I begin to think of what to say and wonder where to start, Hoping that we can rekindle and everything will be fine. I love you more then any words can say, I love you more then anything on this earth. But I cant just sit around and wait allday, There is more to life and I have more worth. So someone tell me what it is I should do, Tell me if there is more to life then just loving you... quick poem tell me what you think?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pineapplegirl Posted November 5, 2004 Share Posted November 5, 2004 >Touching...sad...brings up a lot of my own issues. I liked it. Keep up the writing. I'll look for more of your poetry in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted November 5, 2004 Author Share Posted November 5, 2004 Thankyou very much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MissMandaJo Posted November 10, 2004 Share Posted November 10, 2004 I can really relate to that. I like it a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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