Delaurence23 Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 i live but im not really living because my soul must be iron for my fear is naked. I'm naked and fearless. But I'm dead inside. You see.. sh**adds up, now I'm dead inside. Hatred, weakness, and guilt keep me alive at the bottom........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 That is a deep poem, I wish things were better. Things have to get better if you are at the bottom, right? But sometimes it doesn't feel that way, I know. I'm here. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gefallener_engel Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 nice. short, simple to the point and deep. i really like it. when you're at the bottom you'd better start climbing up... i hate it (especially when you're out of shape like me) but its the only way to go, well unless you wanna run in circles at the bottom until you throw up on yourself... yeah thats what i thought! im a pretty sarcastic person but ill listen. pm me if u wanna talk anytime. engel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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