heartbroken_f Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 It's been one year and I still can't get over you I try with all my might but there's nothing I can do When I see other people I see your face No matter what I do, your image I cannot erase. I wonder whether you think about me, whether you regret what you've done But then on the other hand I think about what you said and how I was shunned My life revolved around you and I believed you would be true But then you just decided to lie to me way out of the blue I would have given up everything to spend forever with you But now that I can't trust you anymore, letting go was the right thing to do I hope you regret what youve done and somehow still think of me Because knowing that in my heart will ultimately set me free... Wishing things were different... Heartbroken_f Link to comment
sisterlynch Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 I think that sounds really nice. You just need to put in the music, and I think that you have a real winner. Link to comment
Serendipity1607307077 Posted October 31, 2004 Share Posted October 31, 2004 Very soulful and truthful.. Just a little bit of refinement and it will be the perfect poem! Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 That poem is really great, I like the emotion in it. Great job, I hope to see more. under* Link to comment
heartbroken_f Posted November 3, 2004 Author Share Posted November 3, 2004 Thanks for your comments everyone. I just felt like I had to write that poem because one year had passed and the feelings are still raw. I hope that things will get better with time... Link to comment
darealshady86 Posted November 7, 2004 Share Posted November 7, 2004 great poem, everything it talked about is what i think too. Link to comment
lostyearsofmerlin Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 dude that is awesome. i felt exactly the same way after i broke up with my first gf. dont worry your not alone. Link to comment
ForAnother Posted November 8, 2004 Share Posted November 8, 2004 Excellent. Enjoyed it very much. Same way we all feel when that happens. Not a fun thing to deal with ForAnother Link to comment
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