Delaurence23 Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 in the bars in the chains the rust smells like pain the water drips from the sealing upon my chained legs we are captured by the chains of our past lives they say forgive n forget but nothing lives like this as my skin begins to burn i am the captive of the dark sun.. and i am the evil one evil to those happy and those entranced in societys games they lock me up deep inside my cage i yell to god for he is supposively my savior yet, in his knowledge and power he withholds the key and i am left burning burning all alone.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 very nice, i like it. you have an interesting point of view on things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 The last reply said 'a darker view on things' I can see you have a darker view on things, I've been there before too, still get there sometimes. I like this poem, good job. I hope to see more of your writings. Dark poetry isn't always a bad thing. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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