nothingontheinside Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 was bored in math class... Clutch onto the hatred of his silent noises seize your last night grasp his dark breaths as they wrap themselves around your heart you cant stop them they tighten with each gasping breath of your own and it tightens the hold like barbed wire tight around you it makes you bleed silently, you scream for help reach out to hit your violater just to realize you're all alone you are your own villian your worst fear no one else has been there its you... all alone your dark crimson tears shatter as they hit the hard ground and then take flight for they are free and you are trapped all within yourself your thoughts, and all ideas stuck inside no one cares and you know it thats why you're all alone the wind crawls accross your face closing your eyes as you fade all alone, rotting away soft night kisses your cheeks kisses your sins goodbye its all your fault they're dead you're dead gasping for breath grasping to touch reality you die in the arms of... yourself because of course no one else cares dried mascara tracks trickled down your face your last tears spilt ruin your face even more ugly, fat you make others want to puke your dead body, sickening you cut your skin you made it hurt it hurt everyone around you now you're there in your internal world of pain angels cry, harps sound shadows come out from underground they grasp your cold hands and remove you from sight no one will even notice your absense. goodbye. COMMENTS WANTED... A LOT OF COMMENTS... I may BE TURNING THIS IN TO A CONTEST SO I WANT FEEDBACK!! TEEHEE thanks love, ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
secksy ecksy Posted October 26, 2004 Share Posted October 26, 2004 WOOP! i got all the way here without my mousey! score.. i love it. esp the form..like there can be only one word on a line, thats awesome anywho, COMMENT YOU HOES! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 friken awesome poem espcially the part about no one will notices your absense im guessing youve felt this many times so have keep writing.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gefallener_engel Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 nice poem! i like it -ich bin schon gefallen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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