renewing Posted October 26, 2012 Share Posted October 26, 2012 The snow soon covers the naked limbs of the trees, transitions into water, settles into the cracks, drips down into icicles. The icicles waiver, create vortices of warm air which then expunge frozen granules of dirt and bits of tree. Frozen light trapped into the icicle tries to escape at night. It is sucked into the beauty. Pointing towards the crumbly, dry earth the icicles see deer, wading through the forest debris. The leaves had prepared. They lie silently underneath the protection of the snow twigs creep under them under the mysterious force of foreign, living legs. As Fall approaches the leaves on the ground that have fallen remind us of the changes we see in our own lives the awareness we have for the things we have lost. Wake up from the forest ground twigs tangled within your hair smell the richness of the trees-- pine cones, acorns, buds-- and stay there until the sun melts the snow on your fading skin and shower in the sunlight. Let the day begin. Let the leaves sink in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roxie84 Posted October 26, 2012 Share Posted October 26, 2012 Thank you for sharing, very beautiful. We need to remember that fall is not death taking us into coldness, but the birth of new beauty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MasterPo Posted October 27, 2012 Share Posted October 27, 2012 As Fall approaches the leaves on the ground that have fallen remind us of the changes we see in our own lives the awareness we have for the things we have lost. I like this. As in any poetry it appeals to something in me, don't know what though. Good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
renewing Posted October 27, 2012 Author Share Posted October 27, 2012 hi Moderators can I please delete this post now because I wanted to keep it from google search for privacy reasons! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
renewing Posted October 27, 2012 Author Share Posted October 27, 2012 oh by the wayyy thanks for the comments guys it was nice to hear something about this. I wrote it in like 20 minutes. I should probably edit a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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