poem please read and reply thanks

[ang3l2004]

It's getting cold out I am cold inside,

I have grown a little but my inside has died.

 

Tears run down my face like a windy and rainy day,

Wiping all the tears from my eyes but they continue to stay.

 

Angry at so many thing's like a fire cant stop the blaze,

Tired of all the confusion stuck in some type of daze.

 

Lost in a tunnel some kind of tunnel from the past,

Heart pouring out emotions that can no longer last.

 

Looking deep within me to find someway to escape,

Where is my life going can it get better is it to late.

 

Depression is nothing but sadness someone make it go away.

Cant I just smile and be happy just for oneday.

 

I am tired of pretending that this is not one big mess,

I am just so sick of faking my happiness thinking I deserve less.

 

Someone help me get better help me realize what I need,

That the plant that is growing up wishes she was a different seed.

 

tell me what you think?

[lil_unique_me]

i think that you poured your heart and soul into what youve written. it really does sound good and i love the use of the rhymes.

so is there anything that i can help you with because i often feel like you have written but today im not feeling that unusually for me.

so anything i can do to help?

Catie xxx

[tiffany82]

i like your poem too. it's good

[ForAnother]

You ever not cry girl?

 

Try writing something of happiness in your life. Get a stream of conscious writing. Write about a day with (I think a boy) this guy, and explain what made him so important that day.

 

I like this one more than some of your others, however all seem to be the same content.

 

ForAnother