PammyFoo Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 BABY BLUE Dripping dunes dot my skin Like heavy pellets from an invisible hoisted gun Ripping and tearing their way Deeper and deeper Into my warm, safe nucleus Seeping through the molecular maze Rolling, rolling down Arrid, dry deserts of dirt below my feet Finally breathe, hydrated I spread my bright blue petals into the moistened air. Inhale Sigh..... At last PALLETE Autumn snow falls splash from above Rolling, sliding off canopies Dotting, spotting the ground below The browns The yellows The reds Merge and combine into a seasonal collage. Art Beauty, oh colourful beauty Enlighten my vision and colour my heart HERR GOD Hallowed be thy name and in thy name they kill Smoke slivvers from the chimneys Of God's poisonous death mills Linen lamps light the lion's lair Is that a freckle? Is that an impurity? Keep them coming to the merciless slayer Roll them out one by one Let them see - for the last time - the sun. Herr God. Herr God. Hallowed be thy name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xbox_modding_freak Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 nice poems ure a good poet..some of the best ive ever seen Here i'll have a beer for you oh and heres one for you -XmF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daredevil Posted October 18, 2004 Share Posted October 18, 2004 3 good poems which all makes sense, and gives a deeper look into some feelings.. and god, i really like the one named "Herr Good".. it really was good.. keep up the good work, and im look forward to see more poems from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SarCareBear Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 Great poems!! short and sweet... i love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 awesome poems you dont see many poems about seasons or god most of them are about our personal feelings great descriptive words you are on your way to being great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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