ForAnother Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 I wrote this high and drunk last nite, just looked at it this morning and made me think I am sorry for a lot of things Things that don't make sense Things of size that don't compare. My reason for existence Is the complete sympathy I have For the living. The dead are in a state of bliss, A colorful enlightenment to the darkness Of life. They have found the reason for loving They have found the reason for living And they have found the reason for dying. Their life is complete… they have found it all. The dead, are the brilliant The living wish to reach this brilliance. All in all… We all wish To be dead. ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SarCareBear Posted October 15, 2004 Share Posted October 15, 2004 pretty good poem.. although, all in all, i DEFINITLY do not wish to be dead and i think many others would agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted October 16, 2004 Share Posted October 16, 2004 Good job. This was my favorite line: The dead, are the brilliant Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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