ang3l2004 Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Deep down inside I know I truly love you, There is nothing in this world I would not do. I have thought about my life with or without you in it, But you in my life is a perfect fit. I remember the day that I looked into your eyes, Not thinking that now I would be filled with cries. You know the key to my delicate heart, It is still yours even though we are apart. I wish you were here holding me near, Making me smile and wiping away my tear. I think about the ways you use to make me feel, I felt it so deep and it was so real. I dream of you at night and long for your kiss, Many things about you I really miss. Just know the door is open and you have the key, To open up the lock and set me free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 This is yet another great poem. Keep writing, I love your poetry. I wish you the best, under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted October 12, 2004 Author Share Posted October 12, 2004 Aww thankyou under!!!!I appreciate that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinobie Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Ya great poem keep on writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Ang3l This is another example of a great poem from you. Please keep writing and posting them here. I love your work sweetie! Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted October 12, 2004 Author Share Posted October 12, 2004 THANKYOU ALL so much for reading and replying Glad you like and can relate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Wow... more than relate... I could say... apply... I really liked those words puted together, they made magic... By the way, that was a great poem 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 Thanks alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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