ang3l2004 Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 I may not be strong I am real weak, Who I am is what I am trying to seek. I am happy sometimes but mostly sad, The pain inside is what hurts real bad. I do love him mabe sometimes more then me, But I am learning to open my eyes and see. I had a hard life but that is all in my past, Mabe that is why my relationship didn't last. I do dwell alot on things I should let go, But I am a good person and that is one thing I know. They say in this life people deserve what they get, But I still have not figured out why that is yet. I do have dreams and I have lots of hope, I am trying to be strong and learn how to cope. Once the storm passes and moves on by, I will know that I made it and wipe the tear from my eye. by Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 That poem is beautiful. I really like it, and usually I pick out the stanza I like the most but I like this whole poem. I know one day I'll be reading them out of a book. You have a true talent here. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted October 11, 2004 Share Posted October 11, 2004 that was a really good poem... and it rimed!! lol 8) j/k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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