Serendipity1607307077 Posted October 8, 2004 Share Posted October 8, 2004 This is a bit different to my usual poetry, as mine usually tends to have some sort of rhyme to it.. but please, criticise away! Resurrection I once made a promise to myself Never to be taken away From the solitude of my singledom Forged in my stone cold heart. The bubble I created to protect me Couldn’t shield me from everything I grew cold and lonely My life became unbearable. I would cry at night Hoping I could find the one The one person I would share The rest of my life with. I found this in you. You unlocked my heart With a key of warmth and love With laughter and affection And the chains fell away. You made me feel safe In a way I have never felt You have shown me A different kind of love. And though I still cry at night It is tears of joy rather than sadness At my fortune of having found A gem so precious and rare. You resurrected me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protex Posted October 8, 2004 Share Posted October 8, 2004 Haven't seen you write in awhile. I've always been a fan. Another awesome poem, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 Amazing poem.Its nice to hear one from you again.Great job. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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