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ang3l2004

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What do you do when you cant stop the cries?

Cant figure out the truth from the lies.

 

What do you do when you just cant let go?

Just pick up and move on from everything you know.

 

How can I sit here and pretend everything is ok?

When all I want to do is be with him again someday.

 

How can I just move on from the one person I love?

The person that I know was my angel from above.

 

Is there anyway in life someone can be happy always?

Not have a life where it's just on and off days.

 

I wonder if he ever feels the same way I do?

If he loves me and wants me back to.

 

He is still in my heart but I am still so confused,

Does he still love me or am I being used.

 

If he happens to meet someone else oneday,

I would be happy for him but would not have much to say.

 

How do I talk to him how do I figure this out for me,

How do I show him with him is where I want to be.

 

If this is just a game I dont want to play no more,

I just want to be happy and want him to walk through my door.

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Very good poem an3el, I gather you are still hurting from your relationship.

 

Is there anyway in life someone can be happy always?

Not have a life where it's just on and off days.

 

I guess life is like a wheel in that there are good times with bad times. Do we learn from the good times? not sure. But we do learn from the bad times, when things go wrong, I'd say yes!

 

Remember that straight after a breakup times are hard, you now say you have on and off days which is a sign of improvement and soon you will be fully recovered.

 

By the way you express yourself very well in your poems, good job

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Again I loved your poem Ang3l. Your a special woman with a talent to express your emotions through writing. I wish that I could say this will pass but, you have been in this state for so long now I am kind of lost as to what I can say to you.

 

Look at my siggy because that is the lifes truth my dear.

 

BTW dont be such a stranger in AIM ok. If you need to talk you know exactly how to reach me. Keep up the awesome writing!!!!

 

Hubman 8)

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Nice a lot like your past poems... still pluggin away with the pain, huh? Well I just had a convo with a girl who broke up with her bf cuz he cheated on her. (a week ago) and she was having a tough time. Just gotta move it outta your mind... gotta say "screw it" and run. Understand you had good times, but its not worth it in the end.

 

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