EmptySoul Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 she works all the time to hide from all the screaming to hide from her life but can't she see- this is the life she chose and it's too late now to change it all if you choose hell, it's yours he works all the time to hide from all the speaking to hide from everything but can't he see- this is the life he chose and it's too late now to change it all if you choose damnation, it's yours i am here all the time and i won't hide you hide from me. can't you see- i am me because of the life you chose but it's not too late for me to change it all i choose him, and he is mine... Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protex Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 Very well done. Keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 Amazing poem emptysoul.Bravo. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 awsome poem, i enjoyed it alot, very well done!!! keep writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 I like it 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted October 4, 2004 Share Posted October 4, 2004 Very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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