Delaurence23 Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 the dark stars shine out a glistening shrine these are my friends their similarities are the basis of my life in relationship they have died and are showing their final light in an everlasting gliss they will leave their mark on the world in a fate they never knew they would walk into an exploding death in something they knew would be coming they will suppply a message to the earth just as i will to... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 interesting. I like some of the wording. I am afraid I miss some of the meaning however the structure is very interesting. I like the quotes in your signature, very interesting. ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 Good poem.It flowed well. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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