i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 What do you do When life is through When death is all thats served to you When love cant save Because the roads its paved Has left you here so lost and dazed So cut my wrists And ball my fists Because i am done with this This little girl Has been through a whirl And her life paints a bloody mural So say goodbye Dont even try Because this young girl is gonna die Hey guys.Sad night sad poem.Lol hope someone likes it. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avman Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 Sorry to hear you are feeling low Meagan. Keep writing though. Let that be your outlet for the pain and frustration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mun Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 I liked it. 8) Keep writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 the poem was really amazing, i liked it a lot. as for whats behind the words, I hope you'll be feeling okay soon. you can talk to me anytime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 You always read mine and say they are great. You are 14, and I think that that is one the best poems i read on here. Typically I like my own poems alot because they relate to my life and because I wanna feel good about myself... but right now I am quite blown away. I love it. I can't tell you how much I like this poem. Wow... ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 3, 2004 Author Share Posted October 3, 2004 Thanks for the comments everyone.I am glad you enjoyed the poem. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted October 5, 2004 Share Posted October 5, 2004 np. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted October 6, 2004 Share Posted October 6, 2004 Meagan, That poem was wonderful. You have a wonderful talent. Let writing be the way you get your feelings out, I know it's a major stress relief. If you need to talk ever, I'm here. Love, under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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