BlueEyes_68 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Well, I don't consider myself much of a poet at all, but sometimes you just have to sit down and write what's on your mind. No title, just the words. Another day of chasing hopes and dreams comes to a close Sitting alone in the middle of the room again The sun has set and the hour is late As the darkness surrounds me Thoughts of love and happiness float through my head like a cloud drifting through a clear blue sky Somewhere, someone is sitting alone as well..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ladyluck Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 that's really good alot of my friends are poets as well. a thought on paper is better spent than lost in the back of your head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Like the old saying, short, sweet and to the point. I really like how it ends, Somewhere, someone is sitting alone as well.....You can consider your writing anything you'd like, and that'd what it is. Keep it up. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 nice poem.Short sweet and to the point.Kepp writing it truly helps express your feelings. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 hey, that was really great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 I can't really say for sure why I like this piece of writing, but I really do. I love the tone of it. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes_68 Posted October 3, 2004 Author Share Posted October 3, 2004 Hey, thanks for all the positive feedback. I actually wrote that about 15 years ago. I have one or two more that might be worth posting if anyone is interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2rublueeyes21 Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 nice poem, i like it. I am sitting alone unfortuantly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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