ang3l2004 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Look deep within my heart tell me what you feel, Tell me if I love you so tell me what is real. Look into my eyes and see that all I see is you, Can you look into mine and tell me what is true. Hold me close and listen my heart has something to say, It's trying to tell you to take care of it each and everyday. Open your heart and let down the wall let me come back in, Dont have any doubt just let our love together win. Smile at me because im smiling for you because you are my sun, Dont be scared of our problems from this you cannot run. Let us be one again so that we can flourish and grow, I love you with all of my heart and soul and this I do know. If we cannot be together again just tell me what you need, So I no longer have to cry and my heart will no longer bleed. please do not kiss my lips and tell me goodbye for good, Do only what you think is right and what you think you should. Every tear drop that hits the floor is one more step away, Making me so confused because all I want you to do is stay. quick poem tell me what u think?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smusher Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 I think it is absolutley simple and beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted October 1, 2004 Author Share Posted October 1, 2004 thankyou very much! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ladyluck Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 you have a talent there. use your gifts in life to get you where you want to go with an open heart and a clear mind this could take you far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Beautiful poem Angel. Keep writing, your poems are always amazing. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Awsome Poem! i really liked it! keep writing! u have a beautiful heart! Ur friend Bilal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted October 1, 2004 Author Share Posted October 1, 2004 wow thankyou so much for your nice comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Nice poem Angel.Another classic.Good job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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