Protex Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Seasons of Love Look out your window, I'm standing below holding nothing more than this simple rose. Summer, As the heat rises and the sun glares I'm still standing below, holding my burning rose. Autumn, See the leaves fall, and the trees lose their iridescence I'm still standing below, holding my prismatic rose. Winter, Feel the harsh cold, and the bitter frost. I'm still standing below, holding my frozen rose. Spring, Watch the flowers grow, and life return to our world I'm still standing below, holding my weathered rose. It's tattered torn and wilted. Watch as the colorless petals fall gracefully to the ground. Look out your window, I'm standing below holding nothing more than my love for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JynX Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 That was very beautifully written...if you ever decide to give it to someone special I'm positive they'll love it. Thanks for sharing it and keep up the good work! JyNx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 That poem was...beautiful. I wish there was another word I could say, because that doesn't even begin to describe it. It's amazing, terrific, outstanding, beautiful, great, fantastic...everything. You are such a great poet and you do deserve this girl, I wish she could see that. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protex Posted October 1, 2004 Author Share Posted October 1, 2004 I hope she sees it too. I just have to keep hoping that one day she will, no matter how far away that day is. Thanks again for your comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 wow..I thought that was incredible. I really loved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 wow that is a great poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Maybe I am cold, because at 15, I didn't really have a crush, nor did I really care about girls yet. I guess I was a late bloomer. Not until about 17 did I really care. So i am glad for you m8. It was good but I don't like how you put the time of year before each stanza. I found like I knew what you were going to say in each season too. Sorry if this is harsh but its out there for criticism (well i hope people critisize my work cuz I wanna get better and see what people really do like) but I still liked it, it made me read through the whole thing which few make me do. ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Amazing poem.That was wonderful.Good job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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