ang3l2004 Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Can you see me standing here? Can you see this falling tear? Take my hand and hold it tight, Let me know that I am alright. Kiss my lips and look me in the eyes, Do you notice I am not out of cries. Hear my heart beat it beats for you, But does your heart beat for me to. Hold me close please dont let me fall, Stop this pain dont let me put up a wall. Make me smile make me feel whole, I love you mind body and soul. I have put up with so much pain inside, Give me hope come join me on this ride. Love me for who I am take me for me, Let us be happy and let us be free. Keep me from things that make me scared, Show me how much you have really cared. Show me that I am what you have looked for, I will let go of the anger and forget you walked out the door. Wipe my eyes when I am crying and sad, Make me feel special then I will be glad. No more yelling and shouting at me, I am a sweet person sweet as can be. If you could feel how I truly feel inside, Then you would know that for you my love has not died. Remember the good times and remember I am true, Just be yourself with me that's all you have to do. Wish apoun a star at night before you go to bed, Remember all the great things I did and all the things I have said. Just walk with me on this wonderful journey hand and hand, Let things go how they go and we will land where we land. Tell me what you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viola Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 woow that was so beautiful.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Great poem! Was it going to go to someone special...? Because its really good 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 WOW That was a beautiful poem and the guy you wrote that about does not deserve your love Ang3l. I hope you are well and I hope to talk to you soon... Keep writing your poetry because I think there is a major talent there sweetie!!! Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted September 30, 2004 Author Share Posted September 30, 2004 wow thankyou all so much!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Bravo, bravo! =D> Great like always. You are an amazing writer. Keep writing! under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JynX Posted September 30, 2004 Share Posted September 30, 2004 Beautiful poem...please keep writing! You have true talent! JyNx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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