duke nukem Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 Now I enjoy reading and interpreting poetry, but I'm not exactly the best poet haha I just thought this one up when I was eating lunch and decided to write it down. Nothing complicated, just a simple one. ------ "I Wanted to Tell You I Love You" I wanted to tell you I love you, When your eyes first met mine, I wanted to tell you I love you, But I knew there would be time. I wanted to tell you I love you, All the hours we spent together, I wanted to tell you I love you, But waited to know you better. I wanted to tell you I love you, Through every argument and fight, I wanted to tell you I love you, But wasn't sure if it was right. I wanted to tell you I love you, As I saw you walk away, I wanted to tell you I love you, But my voice remained the same. I wanted to tell you I love you, Sitting here alone, I wanted to tell you I love you, But was too afraid to phone. I wanted to tell you I love you, As they laid you to the ground, I wanted to tell you I love you, But thought you'd always be around. I wanted to tell you I love you, Now stuck in listless trance, I wanted to tell you I love you, But have lost my final chance. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhowe Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 very beautiful. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duke nukem Posted May 1, 2012 Author Share Posted May 1, 2012 Thanks! Kind of got choked up at one point coming up with lines, thinking about applying this to someone's life. Ouch that would suck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mhowe Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 contact Taylor Swifts' agent and make a few coins!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duke nukem Posted May 1, 2012 Author Share Posted May 1, 2012 Haha nah, ain't that good, lots of other far more poetic people on here. But thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lonelyheart2 Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 aw this is beautiful and I can completely relate to it! Good work duke nukem 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lonelyheart2 Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 O wait not the death part...that's really sad still good poetry though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duke nukem Posted May 1, 2012 Author Share Posted May 1, 2012 Haha, well, it's a metaphor really. Don't miss your chance to do anything, as tomorrow may be too late. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rahulrocks Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 I wanted to tell you I love you, Now stuck in listless trance, I wanted to tell you I love you, But have lost my final chance. Those are the best lines......Never ever miss your chances to say 'I Love You' when you really love someone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rahulrocks Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 A poem for your display pic lonelyheart2... Eyes dark and Blue, got my eyes fixed with some glue, the silky hair behind, and a gesture that looks kind, from where do you come O' lovely face, remove the scarf and let me have a guess, I know you won't give it a damn, would remain hidden and still pretend, Are you laughing beneath the scarf, for the vulnerability of my heart, they say dont talk to strangers, because therein lies the danger, but dont get me wrong, its just appreciation of beuty and your charm..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lonelyheart2 Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 O thank you very much! I feel very flattered to have my own personal poem Very beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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