"Nothing more"

[Phoenixfire]

This is a piece of freestyle poetry i wrote in one of the worst times of my life... It's kinda got a weird beat to it, but anyway... Please tell me what you think, any and all comments are appreciated. It's one of the first poems i ever wrote, so please be kind. Constructive criticism is allowed, just don't go crazy. Thank you in advance

 

NOTHING MORE

Just one tear. Full of emotions, a drop of sunlight in the shade.

A single streak of wetness, wiped away as quickly as it was made.

 

When i lay alone at night, i think of what i've become, the things that have been changed.

I think how my whole life has been stopped, restarted, stopped again and rearranged.

 

The joy in my life has faded and all that remains is a bland existence.

Ironic that all those months ago i though that i could go the distance.

 

Was i crazy for loving somebody? No, but "be more careful" is the message they all say.

I just wish i still had a heart left to break, there's just a hole every night and day.

 

She took parts of me and broke them, and i'm left with just a piece or two.

How can i rebuild myself if i can't get back what's due?

 

Give me back my life, my love, my things, my body and my heart.

Give me back everything i gave you, this time there's no restart.

 

Let me live what's left of my life alone, like you want me to.

I'm doing what you told me, isn't that enough for you?

 

Stop hurting me, just stop the pain, get the hell out and let me be.

No matter what you put me through i will not let you see.

 

The single tear upon my cheek, that splashes on the floor.

For you, because of you, one tear, just one... then nothing more.

[Alpine]

This is beautiful, Phoenixfire

[Phoenixfire]

You have no idea how much hearing that means to me...