ForAnother Posted September 29, 2004 Share Posted September 29, 2004 Its so much easier To sit here And not worry. Pretend all is ok. Let my knees bend And my back arch And let my hands clench. Hold myself over the edge. Look down And smile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 29, 2004 Share Posted September 29, 2004 Beautiful. I love it. Maybe a favorite. ForAnother your poetry is so amazing, maybe you should look into getting it published. It's ....amazing. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 29, 2004 Share Posted September 29, 2004 Foranother, that was the best poem i think i have ever heard.it was short sweet and to the point.Like under said,you should look into getting it published.Good job ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted September 29, 2004 Author Share Posted September 29, 2004 Thank you two ladies very much. I usually use these works for films that I make in film class. Just some ideas. Its crazy when sadness comes into play, I seem to be able to write better. That happen with anyone else? ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 29, 2004 Share Posted September 29, 2004 It happens to me. I can NOT write when I'm all yippy skippy. I have to be angry at the world or in tears. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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