poem please read and reply

[ang3l2004]

I want to leave go far far away,

I am so sick of what everyone has to say.

 

I want to live with a smile on my face,

Not feel used and so easy to replace.

 

I want to feel that feeling that someone does care,

Holding eachother with love to share.

 

I want my heart to be as safe as it can be,

Not on my sleeve where everyone can see.

 

I do want you here but not just sometime,

You are breaking my heart that is a crime.

 

You ask why I dont pick up the phone to call anymore,

It's because I have thought about you walking out of the door.

 

I think about why you dont pick up and call me,

You think there is better things out there you can see.

 

I may be beautiful and broken but im not dead,

I remember every single word that you said.

 

I still love and care for you and still want you in my life,

But all that stuff was bullcrap about me being your wife.

 

I asked you nicely be honest with me,

So this is how things would not be.

 

tell me what you think quick poem thanks!!

[tiffany82]

That's very good. Have you been broken up for a long time? It gets better with time though, hang in there

[i_hate_the_world47]

Wonderful poe.I am sorry about your ex and you.Time will heal this brokenness you feel.Good luck.

 

~Meagan~

[lunatic]

=D>

 

Awesome poem Ang3l keep up the great work... Don't be such a stranger ok?

 

Hubman 8)