Delaurence23 Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 mind concentrated focused but less and less i look into the mirror and find nothing but numb i cut and i bleed but never will i ever be free im trapped in this hole of mine left behind in a discrete memory is what ill be never to be seen again nor will anyone ever be my friend its just a fact a lil moral of mind that friendship is a waste of time leave the casket open and let me buried in the cold earth dont shed those tears and bury them with me because wat you neglect to see is im happier now no frowns no crys just my destiny and fate in my own hands that now i will no longer be just another face BEHIND THE SHADOWS... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 It's very deep. I think you are being stubborn by saying; nor will anyone ever be my friend its just a fact a lil moral of mind that friendship is a waste of time I have very few friends but friendship is not a waste of time. Very good poem, I've been there before, having those same thoughts. If you need to talk to someone, I'm here. Maybe I can help. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 I thought that was amazing! good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 I loved your poem.It was almost like a reflection of my feelings at one time.But,i am also sorry your feeling this way.If you ever need someone to talk to feel free to PM me. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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