Prezkot Posted September 26, 2004 Share Posted September 26, 2004 OK, this is more of a song than an actual poem because I want to get my guitar fixed and actually learn how to play simple & legit, but it still conveys a mood (even if my mood isn't as dark as the song turned out to be at the moment). I rushed the title... I dunno what to call it. Well, w/e... "They Told You" You feel the passion everyday Wandering aimlessly in the dark Never knowing what to say Never breaking through the mold Spiraling hopelessly in the wind You always do what you were told And they told you Will you find what you are looking for Be the one that opens the door of Life is what you make of it This we know for sure Makes you wonder what it's all for If chance happens will you understand Failing pointlessly in the cold Can you speak without a reprimand Can you face yourself in the morning Tumbling recklessly in the black If it all ends give me a warning And they warned you Will you find what you are looking for Be the one that opens the door of Life is what you make of it This we know for sure Makes you wonder what it's all for And they told you And they told you And they told you that everything will be alright But now I know But now I know But now I know that they all were being polite And they asked me Will I find what I am looking for Will I be the one that opens the door of Life is what I make of it I know this for sure It makes me wonder what it's all for Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 26, 2004 Share Posted September 26, 2004 That was agreat.I think it will make a wonderful song.Good job. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 Great job. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 If you said it was a song... were did you get it from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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