Serendipity1607307077 Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 Verliebt Mit Dir A man beyond my wildest dreams That’s what I found in you. And yet this unrequited love Will never speak as true. I have an impossible desire for you Within my very soul. It’s like I have no sense of space Something I can’t control. I keep these thoughts locked far away So that you’ll never find The information that I hold About you, in the back of my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 Wow very nice... I almost fell in love for you right there! Umm... will this poem be tell to someone? because I really like it and enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 wonderful poem.It flowed well. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity1607307077 Posted September 26, 2004 Author Share Posted September 26, 2004 Wow very nice... I almost fell in love for you right there! Umm... will this poem be tell to someone? because I really like it and enjoyed it. Thank you! It never went to the person it was intended for, no... Thanks for the good feedback guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 26, 2004 Share Posted September 26, 2004 Very good poem. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 that was so good. great work, can't wait to read your next one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 Great Poem! you have some talent that i wish i had! keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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