mystery Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 F o r GeT give me my last words put them in my mouth breath into me every lie ive bestowed apon your angle wings take it away take what you gave me take me your words your suffering take what you made me back leave me here swallowed in my own sorrow dont have me be your lieing shame your sad perfect imperfection just give me my last words forget my never existing presense forget my eyes that hide my story the one you gave me forget the reason behind every scar that you engraved into my skin my heart, my lies the scars that tell me who you are that show what ive let you turn me into forget that ive taken the load of your pain away from you into me forget you gave me my last words forget that you sacraficed me for you happily ever after what do you guys honestly think? thanks -mystery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity1607307077 Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 Excellent writing, Mystery! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 Umm... a very likable depressing poem? Thats what I think... hey, don't think I don't like it. I like depressing poems, I write them myself. Sorry for the bad expression or explantion... but very nice 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 Amazing poem.I loved it. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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