nothingontheinside Posted September 24, 2004 Share Posted September 24, 2004 She tries to fly But fails again and again Her beautiful wings Scarred from the past And once again she hits the ground Thud It is almost noiseless And no one notices the small one fall The butterfly is on the ground Weeping tears of despair Hopelessness and worthlessness fill her mind She tries again to fly But falls People walk all around her Not taking notice Of the beautiful creature struggling She's struggling to get through every day And again she wants love And again she wants to see the blood Now the butterfly is holding her blade And slashing up her wings Scars mended from her dire past She is barely able to soar anymore And slowly the wings crumble still The blood drips to the ground As she retreats Marking a trail of where she's been With no path lying ahead of her Each day is improvised As only her love for another Keeps her alive And her small heart beating It stops her body from collapsing And her wings from breaking down completely -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 24, 2004 Share Posted September 24, 2004 Great poem. I really like it. Keep it up. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justtwicethen Posted September 24, 2004 Share Posted September 24, 2004 Very sweet poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 24, 2004 Share Posted September 24, 2004 lol I mean... very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
secksy ecksy Posted September 24, 2004 Share Posted September 24, 2004 when you'd cried I'd wipe away all of your tears when you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears and I held your hand through all of these years but you still have 'hold of me ..those dont really respond to your beautiful poem, because i am here for you, but i am listening to it and it reminded me of you [plus, amy lee is hot]. this poem is awesome, keep up the fricken awesome writing! i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 25, 2004 Share Posted September 25, 2004 I dont know what hit my in that poem,but it brought me to tears.I loved it. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted October 3, 2004 Share Posted October 3, 2004 Great work. This was my favorite part: She's struggling to get through every day And again she wants love And again she wants to see the blood Now the butterfly is holding her blade And slashing up her wings Scars mended from her dire past She is barely able to soar anymore And slowly the wings crumble still The blood drips to the ground As she retreats Marking a trail of where she's been With no path lying ahead of her Each day is improvised As only her love for another Keeps her alive (I know, that was a big favorite part...) Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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