Gauchori Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 Try to figure out what's wrong before the own poem tell you. Its not that great of a poem, but it will keep you think... I think... I feel weird, I feel hot Its like… I'm in a pot? This is weird! This is strange! Something around here, Needs to change! There is something, In the air… And All I do, Is stare… I'm still sitting, On my chair. I smell something, I swear! I fell like… Crying… Something is in my eye!! I'm not laying!!! I got up. Walked around. I looked up, I looked down. I saw smoke, In the air. And now I'm really SCARED! I looked, I checked, And I was… Correct. There was fire in the living room. But what could it be? Oh no! Not the TV!! I hope you enjoy it 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Duderanomi Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 I sure had fun reading that! LMAO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 23, 2004 Author Share Posted September 23, 2004 lol Who else has something to shere that they thought about this poem? Thanks for sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 24, 2004 Share Posted September 24, 2004 That was funny.Nice to have an uplifting poem on the forum for once. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 24, 2004 Author Share Posted September 24, 2004 Well... this poem wasn't the greatest but at list took you off the depression of this world for some 3 minutes. Thanks for posting people. I'm... thankfull 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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