nothingontheinside Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 i wrote these two in class when bored in one day... they kinda have the same theme ya kno... right I suck at titles SHattered HeLL ya KNow? I'm shattered Into a million pieces on the ground Like glass Dropped from up above On the fifth story I look down on my lifeless body And can see my reflection In my glazed over eyes Once so happy Now look horrified As they stare endlessly at me The blood Has fallen too All around my porcelain remains Lie droplets of black blood Surrounding the roses in my hands Feathers fall From my freshly sprouted wings Black I am a fallen angel Never accepted in the world And now rejected from heaven Not even a chance for purgatory So now I fly Down to see you And I close your eyes And kiss your forehead My wings still crumbling Now walking down to hell I see unfamiliar faces around me I have sinned I have wronged But why am I here? I have fallen to my own death Crystal remains only exist No one at my funeral Not one tear shed Except the black mascara tears That I've cried I remain on the ground Outside, alone Rotting away Forgotten by the world Shattered so now I fly Traumatized in circles As my wings continue to perish And the ground continues to crumble Beneath my blistered feet Could I fall farther down? that was the first one... hope u enjoyed it... leave comments Not Visible In the view of no one The raindrops fall Onto the ground below And as they hit They shatter like glass Into a million shards With a splash onto the earth They are in flight In the air like birds Millions of birds now free Taking their first flight They sing songs of beauty Songs of agony, love, sorrow They sing songs of the Past, present, and future As each one continues to call Into the eternity of nowhere In the eyes of no one Teardrops fall From the face Of the beautiful girl From the cheeks of her Porcelain face Tears fall in to her lap She cries as the rain falls She sobbs as the birds fly She bleeds, oh how she bleeds As the birds sing Their final songs of tomorrow And the last raindrops echo Hollow through her ears And throughout the empty night that was the second one concrit is good... whatever just say anything... really... i lvoe getting comments of any kind! -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 \ Hey, Hey, Hey...those are great. Like everthing else you have written. =D> Great job. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 Wow. There's never anything bad to say about your poems. They're incredible, I wish I could write like that. Keep writing, I love reading your stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 23, 2004 Share Posted September 23, 2004 wow Those were great.Another set of poems from a talente writer.good job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted September 24, 2004 Author Share Posted September 24, 2004 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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