The Enigmatical Mr X Posted September 20, 2004 Share Posted September 20, 2004 I watch the rain, All the same. It makes its way, Down the window pane. It knows its course, And carves its path. From unseen source, Unsurpassed. I watch the man, Fight with his wife. See how she stands, And how she lies. She knows her place, Under his spell. A broken face, A frightened girl. I watch the boy, Play with his dog. And their joy, No right or wrong. They do not hear, The shouts or screams. They do not feel, The falling rain. I watch the sun, Becalm the sky. He is young, She is shy. They smile and flirt, And blush as one. That perfect first, For everyone. I watch the moon, Join the stars. I remember you, And know it's hard. For released from here, I would be brave. Yet I fear. And watch the rain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 20, 2004 Share Posted September 20, 2004 The Enigmatical Mr X, That poem was ...more than great. I really enjoyed it. The rhythm was great and everything fit together so perfectly. I really hope to see more of your poetry. Under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 20, 2004 Share Posted September 20, 2004 That was amazing. It flowed so well.Wlecome to enotalone and i hope to see more poetry from you in the near future. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2rublueeyes21 Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 that was a great poem! good job...will be watching for more great ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Enigmatical Mr X Posted September 21, 2004 Author Share Posted September 21, 2004 I'm glad you liked the style, it's one of my favourites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 Excellent. i love it. Especially the Sun verse... I think most of us know that feeling ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 21, 2004 Share Posted September 21, 2004 That was really nice. I enjoyed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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