ang3l2004 Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 I feel so alone and empty inside of my heart, I have thought about the past and why we are apart. I think about the way things use to be, I was with you or you were with me. I think about the ways that you always made me smile, Even though we are apart I have felt this way for awhile. When I am down and I feel like crying, I remind myself im living and that I'm not dying. But still I feel like a part of me has been taken away, I think about you each and every day. I hope that you notice that I do still care, That I have not forgotten the things we use to share. Mabe oneday we can try to work things out, Dont ever think that we cant never have any doubt. I hope you know that you still have my whole heart, Nothing has changed I have loved you from the start. I might act like I am fine and I have moved on by, But when I think about you I begin to cry. I know that I will always and forever be here for you, Anything that happens I will be right here all the way through. So I wish apoun a star that you are thinking of me, That oneday we will both open our hearts and minds to see. So I want to let you know that you are my soul mate, I am counting on our love for one another no longer fate. tell me what you think?? by me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justtwicethen Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 Hey, Im not normally the mushy type but... I have to admit that this poem just brought tears. It's funny how I was just thinking about the times I once shared with her...so I just went to this website and here it is. The most beautiful poem I think I have ever read. It hurts doesn't it? I mean...those times when you and your loved one are inseparable...and then suddenly, it's all gone. A distant memory. *sigh* I don't think I can even describe in words, how much I miss my girl. But I guess thats what makes love so different, so special....it can heal the weakest but can destroy even the strongest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 I loved this one Ang3l you have a talent sweety. Please keep up the great work. Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 Wow what a wonderful peom it made me tear up. You have a way with your words. Please keep writing. Thanks, Luny Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted September 17, 2004 Author Share Posted September 17, 2004 aww thankyou all so much im so glad that you all enjoy reading my poems and thanks for the comments they are always so nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 Amaxing poem.It made me cry,in a good way. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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