mymelancholysoul Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 Katie keeps asking me to put this piece on here. I don't know why she loves it so much lol. But yeah, she figures you all might like it as much as she does. Its another depressing piece, so get over it! lol Not another tear shall fall, And plague the earth below. No longer shall I be in pain, And hurt the ones I love. My soul shall be released, And leave this body behind. I don't know where I'm going, But Its better than where I am. There is nothing left to say in words, My bleeding will do the telling. There are no words for me to share, That will make you understand. In the darkest hour, I shall find a light. My death will be my ecstasy, My way to win the fight. This body shall feel nothing, This mind shall fall asleep. For on the bathroom floor I shall lay, Until my soul is free. You wont know that I am gone, Until it is too late. So please don't worry mommy, Ill die and be in peace. No blood shall crawl to the floor, No bullets shall be shot. Instead Ill take soft poison, And gently fall asleep. Mommy just remember, That this is not your fault. I don't want them to blame you, Don't want you to cry. I just want you to know, That I'm in a better place. No longer shall we argue, No longer shall we fight. Ill say my prayers and then let go, Drifting slowly in the night. Please remember mommy, That I love you with all my heart, But this pain is overwhelming, And this was not your fault. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity1607307077 Posted September 12, 2004 Share Posted September 12, 2004 That is an excellent poem. Sad and depressing, yes, however very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 13, 2004 Share Posted September 13, 2004 So whats wrong with sad and depressing poems? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 13, 2004 Share Posted September 13, 2004 Wow I am glad you posted that.It was amazing.very well written. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
strawberry_gashes17 Posted October 31, 2004 Share Posted October 31, 2004 Nikki, see i told you that they would like it! im not sure exactly y i like this poem so much... but u kno me, cant make my mind up about anything. i think its my favorite because i have always wanted to give it to my mom. ever since the first day that i red it i wanted to give it to her... but o well. thanks for puttin it on here... and keep up the good work! much love always, me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity1607307077 Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 So whats wrong with sad and depressing poems? Nothing wrong with them, it just made me sad!! Quite often it is the sad and depressing poems that are the best written. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 you've got that right.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gefallener_engel Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 nikki... good job getting her to post it. i really like it... it hits so close to home. if u ever wanna talk pm me. very good job, you've got excellent talent here! engel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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