The Artist Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 I'm going back to my hole because I'm tired of being round here with all the pain and all the fear so it's time to disapear I'm going back to my hole where it's warm, safe and sound no false hopes and no let downs where I can wear my own crown I'm going back to my hole where there's no one else around who can try to bring me down because I'm underneath the ground I'm going back to my hole where I can no longer be hurt I'm protected by the dirt and there's nothing more that you can do I'm going back to my hole where I can do no wrong and I can think what I want and you can go get lost I'm going back to my hole there's nothing left for me nothing to do, nothing to see so it's time for me to leave I'm going back to my hole and I'm never coming back someone else can pick up the slack this is the end of the track I'm going back to my hole I will not say goodbye let you all wonder why but you'll forget it all in time when I'm back in my hole! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abcd1234 Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 This can refer to situations that people find themselves in in life - a lot of people would rather be somewhere safe where nothing can hurt or upset them, i know i would sometimes. Its a very meaningful poem, i like it a lot. abcd1234 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtastic Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 I like it. I find myself feeling like that every so often, and I'm sure may others do too. Its also a well wirtten poem, its very lyrical and has a good rythm and flow too it. Keep up the good work, mtastic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 Nice poem.I liked it alot. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 niiiiiiiiiiiii- ce lol nice 1 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 I really like that poem. I've been there before and sometimes I still get there...but then I realize it's better outside of the 'hole' Keep up the good work. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted November 28, 2004 Share Posted November 28, 2004 i like this poem...and it can be taken by anyone and molded to fit everyone indivually because you left it open for that. I love that you were not so particular and so everyone can see themselves as the writer because we all have our own different "hole"s. Good job =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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