nothingontheinside Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 this is not one of my best but i thought id post it anyway. enjoy and feel free to bash at will. ART I took out a brush And painted the world around me I used all the colors of the rainbow And let out all of my feelings All my emotions onto my work of art I step back And look down There's blood all over the floor I have taken my brush And torn my heart out Art is a magical thing And the crimson around me looks so real It hurts The pain is real this time So I take a step forward to a new canvas And start a new work of art With my hand covered in blood I step back And all I see is gray Assorted shades of gray lie around me in a field The flowers no longer have the colors of elegance That they had before I have painted my world gray Avert your eyes Before your world becomes gray too The sun no longer shines It burns The wind no longer blows and whistles It laughs I fall down into the field Of once beautiful flowers I tire easily and rest Coldness overwhelms by body They have found me A murder has occurred And I was caught Red-handed My death, my pride, my suicide Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katie1414 Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 wow thats really good!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 wow... I thought that my poems were the only gray ones... lol j/k Umm... very good. I hope you share the rest of your peoms some time and show this people the beauty of words. Specially coming from the heart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 I thought that was a very well written poem.Good job. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 i could feel you on this one have you ever heard a song bye the rolling stone's paint it black i love that song . and i love your poem it was great. hardcore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShroudedSorrow24 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 That was really well written, made my heart beat fast at the end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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