The Artist Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 I've got your picture along side my bed I'm all alone but you're running round my head I wish you were here but you're to far so I close my eyes and imagine you are I lie awake thinking of you just hurting myself nothing else to go you had to go you could not stay I want you here but you're so far away and look at me as pathetic as can be down on my knees wishing you were here but you're on the other side of the world and I'm just hurting myself that's how it is and that's how it always will be i think of you all the time no matter what i do you will never leave my mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 great poem! keep it up...if you ever need to talk feel free to pm me. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Artist Posted September 8, 2004 Author Share Posted September 8, 2004 Thanks, I actually wrote it a while ago, I've got heaps that have just been sitting around but now that I've found this site I think I'll share them. I wonder if anyone will pick what what one was about, I changed some of the words to make it less obvious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justtwicethen Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 Wow... An amazing poem. It almost hurts to read it since it is the position I am..or have been locked in for too long. my advice to anyone: don't get into an LDR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 wow you really hit a cord with me on this one it make's me think of the one's i have lost never to come home to see there smiling face . truly great i know you wrote it from your heart . never befor has anyone ever been able to preice my cold heart with word's till now . thank you hardcore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justtwicethen Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 siiiiigh... man, why does it hurt....after so long I still think about her.. I mean she's over 4,000 miles away. its been a year. I want this pain to go away.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 Dude I know how you feel... and my poems I guess have been related to this as well. Good thing she is not far away in land, she is far away... umm... if you read my poems you'll find out. Thnaks for sharing the beauty of poetry with us and I hope you feel better 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 Very well written poem.I liked it alot. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 I thought that was awesome, but am I the only one who sees what it's about?...I dunno about what everybody else thought, but it's about masturbation..not trying to be perverted here. I thought the Artist did a great job describing it as a deep human action instead of a dirty little secret. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity1607307077 Posted October 24, 2004 Share Posted October 24, 2004 That's a very true poem, I love it... well done on this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 Yep same situation... nothing is ever perfect... win some lose some. ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts