Gauchori Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 Tell me what you think about this guys! It came right out of my heart and tell witch line you liked the best. Thanks. I'm in love with her but she does not know it.- Part 2 Time has come again, To overcome my fear. Am I really doing this? Is this for real? I can't talk to her, I'm too shy. I can't do it! I'm just a guy. Should I just walk up to her? And tell her how I feel? NO! I can't do it! To her, I'm no big deal. I remember the good times we had together, How good I felt. But time has passed by, And I'm… not felling well. I am sick, But not for health. I'm love sick, Because of her. There's no doctor, no therapy, To take away the pain. I'm so stupid, I'm so lame. Now I ask myself, Why did I let her go? There is no answer, no solution. She is gone. I can still see her, See her smile. I'm crazy! I'm full of desire. What is going to happened to me? Am I going to die? All I can ask, is when and why. -The End- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 just do it. i like this one as well great job. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 Bravo that was a very well written poem.I liked it. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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