Gauchori Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 This poem came right out of my heart. Its something I'm living and... tell me what you think about the poem. It does not have a happy ending because in real life it still didn't so... Tell me what you think. Thanks- Poem- I'm in love with her but she does not know it. I'm in love with a girl. She is like a pearl. I love her some much, But all I can do is watch. Watch how she passes in front of me. Watch how she passes by. Without a saying word, I feel the pain, deep inside. I write about her in my every poem, I see her in my every dream. I always think about her, This is extreme! I can see her face, I can see her smile. I just want to be with her but… How? I am just too shy, Even though I try. I don't want to say a word, Because I'll look like a nerd! What can I do? To take this pain from me. There is nothing I can do, Because now its part of me. She is going away. She is moving on. I feel destroy, And at the same time, full of joy. I wish her good. And all the happiness she could have. But what am I? I'm just shy… Sometimes I look at the sky, And see myself as just a guy. Sometimes I cry, But I just can't say good-bye. I wished she had noticed me, And knew how much I loved her. But time has passed… So, so fast. -The end- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 Amazing poem.I hope the girl you love comes around and notices you love her.Good luck. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 7, 2004 Author Share Posted September 7, 2004 Thank you Meagan. I hope everything goes well with you too, and that you will be happy as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maimai Posted September 7, 2004 Share Posted September 7, 2004 Oh, it's moving, I can feel what you're thinking and your love to her. Have you sent the poem to her? Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hardcore Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 there are so many poems here but i think this one stands out 8) hardcore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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