poem please read and reply

[ang3l2004]

As I am looking into your eyes and feel us drifting apart,

Now I know I am falling away from this love from the start.

 

I see all of our memories inside of my mind,

The love we shared I always wanted to rewind.

 

I remember the good times and all of the bad,

I remember that I always was so alone and sad.

 

But as time has went by and I have opened up my eyes,

I have delt with all this anger and had so many cries.

 

When you love and care for someone more then they do,

In the end all of the pain ends up being with you.

 

My broken heart will always and forever be there,

I will always love you and I will always care.

 

It's hard to let go of the person you love so much,

To not have them by your side and not feel there touch.

 

But it gets worse before it ever gets better inside,

Even now some of my feelings I try to hide.

 

I still find myself with my head down and me thinking about you,

I know that probably sometimes you think of me to.

 

You told me so many things when you left to be alone,

Then I put up with many things just to call you on the phone.

 

But now its slowly getting better and you might just see a smile,

In life no matter what make everything worthwhile.

 

quick poem tell me what you think??

[lunatic]

Hey sweety it does get better in time and that I can promise.

 

I loved your poem more than words can say.

 

 

Keep up the great work on your poetry.

 

Hubman 8)

[CarterJonas]

A very good and emotionally expressive poem. Hang in there it gets a lot better with time.

 

 

[i_hate_the_world47]

ang3l2004,

it is nice to see another wonderful poem from you.i loved this one as much as al the others.time heals all wounds,you will see.good luck.

 

~Meagan~

[ang3l2004]

aww thankyou all so much!