lostNheartbroken Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 The most mystical experience Our time together Lying here entwined hand in hand without words without actions we share a knowing of oneness, of love of belonging in this place in time a peace, a fullness overtaken I am yours... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 Very good dude. I'll say if you coul separate some lines into more like... paragraphs... it would look better and a little longer. Thanks for sharing with us something inspiring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 That was a very good and sweet poem.Its nice to read a sweet poem on the forum. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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