landclark Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 He filled her heart He filled her head He left a dream But she awoke To find emptiness To find pain She left him She left before she was left She found solace in the emptiness Now she feels nothing Now she sees nothing Now she wants nothing Nothing is safe Nothing is sane Nothing is filling How does she open her heart? How does she feel again? How does she forgive? She copes She gets by She finds a way……. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kungfumaster Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 Nice poem Ms. landclark. I like the last line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 Good good. Keep on and work to get even better! (We all need some little push) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fill Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 Great poem landclark. Just like kungfumaster said, I really like the last line. I hope to one day to cope with my loss, get by, and find a way... =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lunatic Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 Hey Landclark, I just wanted to tell you to hang in there because things will get better. Plus I liked your poem simple and to the point. I really liked the last three lines too! Keep up the good work! Hubman 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 well,that was a very well written poem.i hope to see more of your work on enotalone in te future. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 I really like that poem. It was great, and as most replies said, I really like the last lines/stanza best. Hope to see more! under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 Hey. I liked it. My favorite part was: She found solace in the emptiness Now she feels nothing Now she sees nothing Now she wants nothing Nothing is safe Nothing is sane Nothing is filling I can relate to those stanzas. Thanks. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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