lost_alone Posted September 1, 2004 Share Posted September 1, 2004 Your not around now Your not here for me You left me wen i needed u most And now im alone I watch the nites pass by They are slow and endless Im in my own world now Speak to me I've lost my star Out of the millions in the midnight sky You were to me what the sun is to earth Without it, earth would be cold dark and empty I never stopped loving you I never will I love you baby But lost love only gives me a broken heart Ive had enough of danger I thought that my lonely days were over But there back now to stay Just like that uncle that outstays his welcome GO AWAY! Sometimes i feel like if it ended tonite All those lonely days will be over All those pointless steps towards an inevitable end Could be cut short And give the world one less mouth to feed I guess that just because i cannot see the light The light at the end of the long and winding tunnel This doesnt mean that it isnt there You came out of the blue The best things in life come unplanned The end is bleak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herewegoagain Posted September 1, 2004 Share Posted September 1, 2004 I hear you - I can relate to everything that poem says. Did you make that up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lost_alone Posted September 1, 2004 Author Share Posted September 1, 2004 Yeh i wrote it. I wrote it to describe how i feel. As you can probably guess not the happiest time in my life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 1, 2004 Share Posted September 1, 2004 That poem was good. I liked how you said something about how maybe if you just ended everything the lonely days would be over but you still had a little positive-ness in you to know that the end will come and it'll be better. Most people (including myself) when they get down will just want to end it all, and say 'no it won't get better' but deep down they know it will. I like how it shows both sides of it. I really hope to read more of your poems. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 2, 2004 Share Posted September 2, 2004 Well,i loved your poem.It expresses so many feelings.All of which i have saldy felt before.I hope to hear more poetry from you in the near future. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lost_alone Posted September 2, 2004 Author Share Posted September 2, 2004 Thanx everyone, its nice to know that people enjoy my poetry. I cant write poetry unless i feel sumthin deep down in me and then the only real way that i can express it is by writing it in poetry. Thats the first ever poem that ive actually not kept to myself, but i saw so many people feeling how i feel on this forum so i thought that it would make everyone feel a whole lot better about themself. You might feel like you are the only person in this boat and that nobody else is going thru the same, i know this coz i have had these thoughts too. But really we are all in the same boat and were not gonna sink without putting up a damn good fight! Thanx everybody Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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