mymelancholysoul Posted August 30, 2004 Share Posted August 30, 2004 Well, I don't really know what sparked this piece. I am keeping with this new style because I enjoy how the words flow. Not the best work but certainly not the worst. Your suggestions and comments are, as awalys, much appreciated! Check me out on deviantart too! link removed Shes on a featherbed Where a thousand angels Cry their tears. And somewhere, A soft white glow Fades in and out Swallowing Her whole. Coal colored eyes cast to the side Such a delicate smile With fingertips rapping and tapping, Feeling for life. His hands brought her here To this bed on the floor. Searching and scanning, Touching and laughing, Through all of her tears. Kissing his neck with Pursed lips Just brushing And touching No love Or emotion. He feels her there With closed eyes. His smile, Fading in the night. But his prize has left And is pouring Into the sink And sinking To the floor. Whispers echo and scream Pushing her over, And somewhere, A soft white glow Fades in and out Swallowing Her whole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 30, 2004 Share Posted August 30, 2004 wow that was a very good poem.You have alot of talent. ~Meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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