dpressedone89 Posted August 30, 2004 Share Posted August 30, 2004 im so sick and so tired of you draining my soul as long as you live inside i'll never be whole you hate life so much you threaten to leave the attention you need when your gone we will grieve you are so down inside this attention you crave to get it you lie and threaten to dig yourself an early grave life isnt so bad but you may want it to be your lies make a noose and hang you, as you will see the things you pretend so bold and untrue i've grown accustomed to it i will never give my attention to you you say that your depressed suicidal and alone you cry at night wishing we would let you die on your own but the truth is your life is good no true reason to complain the rich happy child wanting attention why, we are unable to explain but deep inside your soul lives a happy person in you parents may ignore this child so attention you need so true be happy with what you have dont complain or whine the sun will come out the sun will still shine dont preten to know what its like to live the way that i do living reflectful because when you steal part of me and claim my life as your own it is deemed disrespectful your life is better than mine and yet im happier than you are you see dead stars falling i see shining stars you pretend to be sad for attention you'll get never more you live the best life of all what are you crying for -stitches aka The Antihero any oppinions, comments/criticism anythin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mymelancholysoul Posted August 30, 2004 Share Posted August 30, 2004 I really like the message's your poem gives off. The flow falls fine and your honesty comes as a great comfort. =) Thank you muchas for the comments you leave on my work, I do hope to read more by you in the future. I would also ask that you consider creating a Deviantart account, so that all your work can remain on display. Just a thought. Take care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 30, 2004 Author Share Posted August 30, 2004 i will open a deviantart account if you tell me how Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 30, 2004 Share Posted August 30, 2004 That poem was great. Maybe to me it said something else. One thing I don't like is sympathy. I don't like getting sympathy and giving it to people who want it. And to me that poem pretty much says that he/she is 'frontin' about life and just wants sympathy. I know many people like that. Your poem is good. I want to keep seeing it. always, under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 30, 2004 Share Posted August 30, 2004 that was a wonderful poem.It reminds me of a friend.Good job. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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