paulo ribeiro Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 here's a very heartfelt poem of mine which i wrote a few years ago and feel like sharing: tear crystalline drop of water snuggling its own salt fails to cling and slides through the quivering cheek all the pain it carries snug between molecules of life is slowly pulled by gravity and slinks through the warm cheek a stream of hope rinsing the strain meticulous little teardrop carrying away sadness a spring of relief where loneliness entwines with suffering Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abcd1234 Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 a very heartfelt poem Yes it is, and a very good one too. Keep writing and posting them! abcd1234 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unforgiven Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 it was a great poem i think it was very haert felt i could almost see it in my mind ,. if you know what i meen and i see that you two are new here so i would like to say welcome as well looking forward to seeing more of your work . unforgiven Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
paulo ribeiro Posted August 28, 2004 Author Share Posted August 28, 2004 thank you both, your comments are very kind! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 29, 2004 Share Posted August 29, 2004 Wonderful poem.It was so full of emotion and very heart felt.By the way i see your new to the site so welcome to enotalone.I hope to hear more from you in the near future. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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