MGandV Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 So your life seems to tip the balance Shaking their ignorance into utter silence Drowning out the madman Taking up your own stand Believe in yourself You know you have to get the upper hand Up on a pedestal They think they have a better rule Tighten your fist It's time to knock away their gist Take a hit They think they got you down Don't be fooled You're gonna turn the tables around Everybody wants to attack what you believe in Everybody wants to close the doors you open Keep your head high don't let them change your mind What good is one voice once your focus goes blind So you know the answers lie within you The voices in your head trying to keep you true Turn it on the outside Don't give up your own pride You're ready to fight They won't know what hit them from the inside Talking like a damn fool They listen to their own bull Don't look now I think they hired another clown Closed minds Playing follow the leader Pay the price Your time is ticking back the meter Eveybody wants to attack what you believe in Everybody wants to close the doors you open Keep your head high don't let them change your mind What good is one voice once your focus goes blind Tearing down the doors that kept you locked up inside Breaking the illusions now it's your time to ride Don't hold back They'd only drag you to the ground The message is clear You led them to the final round You put up a fight You never backed down when they laughed at you You knew you were right Now the answers lie before you I think they had enough Listen to yourself Be strong and let it flow Follow your own way Who cares which way the other's go Sorry guys, I am older and don't have much anger in me anymore. I think more positively and because of it I don't have any "dark" poems to write. I could but it's harder to write what I don't feel. Anyway here is another one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtastic Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 I like it. Its positive and a has an uplifting message. keep up the good work, mtastic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 Awesome poem.This is the second one of yours that i have read and you are a talented writer.Hope to read more in the near future. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 it doesn't matter if your poem isn't 'dark' i liked it. it was really good. keep it up! under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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