dpressedone89 Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 dark shadows of nothing fall into the endless sea of torment solid motions of nothingness the sadness within grows, my life has fallen from greatness bleeding angel subsiding from grace the light in my life has fallen to the shadows the joy within my heart has been raped from me no one seems to care im fading from existence my light is fading, my flame is cooling not a person alive to help me nor anyone to care crying jesters in the courtyard that is my life happiness to sadness is like the sun to the moon they go hand in hand but the moon rarely eclipses and blocks the sadness out even the sun has shadows cast upon it in my world the tears of nobody drown me in pain i feel sick to look in the mirror im shattered even in a flawless mirror the eternity cast by reflection fades away giving in to a sad portrait of my life as i let my tears wash away who i thought i was -stitches aka The Antihero what do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 That was awesome! I like this part the best "happiness to sadness is like the sun to the moon they go hand in hand but the moon rarely eclipses and blocks the sadness out" You really have a fluid style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 awesome stitch... just awesome i love u =D> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 Wow that was awesome stitches.Your such a great poet.Keep writing and stay strong. i love you ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unforgiven Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 great job what more can i say i loved it . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 good freestyle. i like it, but i have read some better ones. you are a great writer. keep it up. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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