MGandV Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 Two open doors One mine, one yours Floating accross the deep blue ocean There's a bottle out at sea With a message can it be A page ripped from a book that's been forgotten Years have passed away Tears they fall all day There's a storm cloud that covers the water And the rain keeps pouring down Now the bottle cannot be found And the doors they drift apart even further There's a stranger who's crying for the book that's been dying There's a story that's been twaiting to be given its happy ending If only the last page can be found Far below the broken docks floats a bottle through the rocks With a page that's been numbered "17" for each knocks On our doors to this life was the only sound But the doors remained wide open While time beckons for more Until one day the bottle drifted through And shattered as it hit the floor The page within found it's rightful place in a book that was forgotten That book was about me and you As the page revealed What has once been concealed After 17 years of searching Here the book remains open For there was no happy ending The sky turned to black And the waters went away The doors they stand side by side Closed and locked to our dismay Wait! There's a light peircing through the keyholes Take a look inside There you are Here I am Two broken hearts staring into each other's souls Now the book has a new chapter But the pages have no words For the doors cannot be opened from within. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 thats awesome, deep, very descriptive and good use of words,it was wonderful, keep up the good work, -stitches aka The Antihero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 That was a wonderful poem continue posting you are very talented Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protex Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 My heart actually hurts now. That was simply amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 Hey awesome poem.I loved it.Full of emotion and it flowed well. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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